Official NYCPS Vendor

College essay and career storytelling support for NYCPS students, educators, and schools.

Free StoryBuilder access for all NYCPS students and educators. Discounted workshops and coaching with code NYCPS. Full programs available for schools.

For students

Free StoryBuilder access, plus discounted workshops and coaching to help you write your college essays and build your career stories. Use code NYCPS at checkout.

Free StoryBuilder access

All NYCPS students get free StoryBuilder access, including our story creation tool, Daily Story prompts, and two self-paced courses. Want full access? NYCPS students get a discounted upgrade.

Discounted live workshops

Join live 2-hour college essay and career storytelling workshops with expert coaches and peers.

Use code NYCPS at checkout

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Discounted 1:1 coaching

Work 1:1 with an expert coach, live on Zoom or through written feedback on your drafts. Grounded in the Moments Method®. 1 credit = 20 min live session, 1 personal statement review, or 2 supplemental reviews.

Use code NYCPS at checkout

Free resources

Download free worksheets and guides to help you brainstorm, draft, and polish your college essays.

For educators

Free educator access to StoryBuilder, discounted professional development, and ready-to-use classroom resources. Use code NYCPS at checkout.

Free StoryBuilder educator account

NYCPS educators get a complimentary upgraded StoryBuilder educator account (normally $49/year), including a dashboard to monitor student progress and engagement. Just reach out to get set up.

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Discounted PD workshops

Join our live 2-hour PD workshops to learn how to teach the Moments Method® and provide question-based feedback on student essays.

Use code NYCPS at checkout

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Free resources for the classroom

Downloadable worksheets, rubrics, and sample essays to use in your classroom or advising sessions.

Bring us to your whole school

Want to go deeper? We work with NYCPS schools to build custom programs that include student workshops, educator PD, curriculum licensing, and full platform access.

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NYCPS school pricing

Bring Revision Learning to your whole NYCPS school with one of our three preset partnership options or a custom program. Programs can be delivered virtually or in person in NYC. All partnerships are one-year contracts and include complimentary seats in our paid live workshops and classes.

NYCPS perk

The $300 onboarding fee is waived for NYCPS schools

Additional bulk pricing is available for larger programs. Reach out to discuss →

Partnership options

Option 1

Upgraded StoryBuilder Access

$250

up to 50 students and 25 educators

$4/additional student · $5/additional educator

For students

Daily Story Writing Prompts to inspire students and strengthen their storytelling skills

Story creation tool, a step-by-step guide to the Moments Method® that helps students write story-based essays

17 self-paced courses guiding students through the college admissions process and preparing them for career success

Access to exclusive college essay events, including biweekly office hours with Revision Learning founder Nick Fernald

For educators

Dashboard access to monitor student progress, track essay drafts, and provide timely support without needing to read every draft

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Option 2

Upgraded StoryBuilder Access + Workshop

Upgraded StoryBuilder access is included with every workshop. Choose the student workshop or the educator workshop, each two hours and led by experienced Revision Learning coaches. Available virtually or in person in NYC.

College Essay Launch

Student workshop · 2 hours

Students are introduced to the Moments Method® and the role of storytelling in college admissions. They build a portfolio of stories they can use across all college essays (personal statements, supplemental essays, and scholarship essays) and leave with a personal statement first draft.

$1,500 virtual

up to 50 students · $10/additional student

$3,500 in person (NYC)

up to 50 students · $15/additional student

Teaching the Moments Method® and Providing Question-Based Feedback

Educator workshop · 2 hours · Curriculum access included

Educators learn how to use the Moments Method® to teach students to use storytelling for college admission essays and career success, and how to provide question-based feedback on students' college admission essays.

$2,500 virtual

up to 20 educators · $100/additional educator

$4,500 in person (NYC)

up to 20 educators · $125/additional educator

Custom workshops and multi-session programs available upon request.

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Option 3

Upgraded StoryBuilder Access + Workshop + 50 Coaching Credits

Our most comprehensive option pairs a two-hour workshop with 50 coaching credits that can be distributed across students and used for any type of college essay, including personal statements, supplementals, and scholarship essays.

Coaching credits can be used for asynchronous written feedback or live 1:1 sessions on Zoom. For written feedback, students receive a response within 48 hours including a personalized letter noting areas for improvement, a color-coded rubric ranked by priority, and 5 to 7 specific, targeted in-line comments offering suggestions for the next draft.

College Essay Launch + 50 Coaching Credits

Student workshop · Upgraded StoryBuilder access included

$4,000 virtual

up to 50 students · $5/additional student

$6,000 in person (NYC)

up to 50 students · $10/additional student

Teaching the Moments Method® + 50 Coaching Credits

Educator workshop · Upgraded StoryBuilder access + curriculum included

$5,000 virtual

up to 20 educators · $75/additional educator

$7,000 in person (NYC)

up to 20 educators · $100/additional educator

Additional coaching credits available at $55/credit, or as low as $50/credit with bulk pricing. Learn about coaching →

Looking for a custom package or à la carte services? Reach out to build something that fits your school →

Also available for NYCPS schools

Additional student workshops

Essay Essentials, Personal Statement Workshop, Essay Editing, Build Your Career Stories, Cover Letters, Interviews, and more.

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Curriculum licensing

Access to our full college essay curriculum: lesson plans, slide decks, and student handouts your team can facilitate independently. Included with educator PD workshops.

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Frequently asked questions

Is Revision Learning an approved NYCPS vendor?

Yes. Revision Learning is a registered NYCPS vendor and an approved resource listed by the NYC Charter School Center. NYCPS schools can purchase our services through standard procurement channels.

Is Revision Learning compliant with NYCPS data privacy and security requirements?

Yes. StoryBuilder has completed the NYCPS Data Privacy and Security Compliance process. Revision Learning aligns with FERPA, New York State Education Law 2-d, and Chancellor's Regulation A-820, as well as NYCPS Guidance on Artificial Intelligence. We handle student personally identifiable information (PII) and staff APPR data in accordance with NYCPS standards.

How do NYCPS schools start working with Revision Learning?

The best way to get started is to reach out directly. Email us at hello@learnrevision.com or book a 15-minute call, and we'll work with you to build a program that fits your school's needs.

Do individual students and educators need a contract?

No. Every NYCPS student can create a free StoryBuilder account right away, and every NYCPS educator can request a complimentary upgraded educator account. Discounted workshops and coaching are available with code NYCPS at checkout, no contract required.

What does a school program include?

We offer three preset partnership options: upgraded StoryBuilder access for your school, StoryBuilder plus a workshop, or StoryBuilder plus a workshop plus 50 coaching credits. If none of these fit, we can build a custom program for your school. All partnerships are one-year contracts and include complimentary seats in our paid live workshops and classes. See full details on our organizations page →

Can you deliver workshops in person at our school?

Yes. All of our workshops can be delivered virtually or in person. In-person pricing for New York City schools is listed above. For schools outside the city, in-person pricing is available upon request.

Do you work with NYC charter schools?

Yes. Revision Learning is also an approved resource listed by the NYC Charter School Center, a vetted designation requiring a referral and review process. We partner with charter networks across New York City to deliver college essay and career storytelling programs.

What's the Moments Method®?

The Moments Method® is a neuroscience-based storytelling framework that helps students find meaningful experiences from their own lives and shape them into clear, specific, memorable essays. It's the foundation of everything we do, from StoryBuilder to our workshops to our coaching. Learn more →

Still have questions?

We're happy to help. Reach out to us at hello@learnrevision.com and we'll get back to you as soon as we can.

From the NYCPS community

“I loved the emphasis that was put on the importance of generating an essay that brings the uniqueness of the writer as well as exemplifies their best qualities.”

Student, NYCPS

“I got to start my personal statement and plan out what I was going to write. I now have a structure and plan that I can continue to work on.”

Student, NYCPS

“I enjoyed that we took a full story and broke it down into three simple sentences. It helped me look at things in a simpler light.”

Student, NYCPS

“The skills and techniques for writing essays was my favorite part — it's something I will be using for my next few years in school.”

Student, NYCPS

Ready to begin?

Whether you're an NYCPS student or educator ready to dive in, or a school looking to build a full program, we're here to help!