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3 Phrases You Should Never Use in Your College Essay (and What to Do Instead)

Most students accidentally weaken their college essays by using generic phrases like “I learned,” “I realized,” or “I felt.” These lines make essays sound repetitive and prevent admissions officers from seeing a student’s authentic perspective. Learn what to write instead—and how to make your story truly stand out.

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How Storytelling Helps You Stand Out in a Tough Job Market

In today’s competitive job market—especially in New York City—resumes alone aren’t enough. Storytelling helps you stand out by making your skills and values memorable, authentic, and compelling. Learn how to use stories in interviews, networking, and applications—and why practicing in community can give you the confidence to shine.

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4 Great Personal Statement Examples (and Why They Worked)

Looking for real personal statement examples that got students into top schools? This guide shares 4 standout essays—covering topics from family dinners to community organizing—and explains why each one worked. You’ll learn how to highlight your unique voice, turn everyday experiences into compelling stories, and write a college essay that admissions officers won’t forget.

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Forget Topics! 7 Tips to Jumpstart Authentic College Admission Essays

Unlock your best college admission essays with 7 expert storytelling tips. Learn how to turn everyday moments, defining experiences, and personal reflections into authentic essays that reveal your character and make your application stand out. Perfect for students nationwide seeking college essay help and guidance in college admissions storytelling.

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How Career Storytelling Sets You Apart, Especially in Mission-Driven Fields

In mission-driven fields like education and nonprofits, your resume isn’t the whole story, and it shouldn’t be. Career storytelling helps you connect your skills, experiences and character to the work you want to do. It builds trust, shows authenticity, and makes you memorable. In this post, we’ll break down why storytelling matters, when to use it, and how to tell your story in a way that resonates.

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10 Things to Avoid in Your College Essays

Avoid common college essay pitfalls with our top 10 tips! Learn how to craft authentic, engaging essays that reveal the real you without clichés, over-editing, or losing your unique voice. Discover what admissions officers really want and how to make your story stand out.

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How Does Someone in College Admissions Read Your Application?

How Does Someone in College Admissions Read Your Application?

Curious about what happens when your college application lands on an admissions officer’s desk? Admissions readers review your entire profile holistically—from academics and essays to extracurriculars and recommendations—to understand who you are as a student and a person. Learn how each part of your application is evaluated, what admissions officers look for, and tips to make your application stand out.

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