The Revision Approach
One framework. A lifetime of stories.
The Moments Method®, a neuroscience-based storytelling framework that helps people find, shape, and tell the stories that matter most, is at the heart of everything we do.
The Moments Method®
A neuroscience-based framework for finding, shaping, and telling the stories that matter.
Created by Dr. Carol Barash, Ph.D. in English from Princeton University. Integrated into everything we do — our platform, workshops, coaching, and curriculum.
Most people know they have a good story somewhere. The hard part is finding it, shaping it, and telling it in a way that lands. The Moments Method® gives you a repeatable process for doing exactly that, one you'll use long after working with us.
Most college essay support teaches students to write one good essay. We teach them a process they can apply to every essay they'll ever write — personal statement, supplementals, scholarships, and beyond.
While other companies show models, teach essay-specific formulas, or rely on heavy editing, we give students one clear framework and the skills to use it independently. The result is essays that sound like them — not like what they think admissions officers want to hear.
Personal statements
Find the moments that show who you really are, not just what you've done.
Supplemental essays
Apply the same framework to answer any prompt, for any school.
Scholarship essays
Tell your story in ways that resonate with any audience, any context.
A skill for life
What students learn here, they carry into careers, leadership, and beyond.
For career stories
In a world of automation, your story is what makes you irreplaceable.
Explore career stories →AI is automating resumes, cover letters, and even interviews. But it cannot replicate your lived experience, your specific moments of growth, or the way you connect with another person in a room. That's where your career stories live, and they're more valuable than ever.
Using the Moments Method®, we help professionals build two things: their Career Story, the overarching narrative that answers "tell me about yourself," and their individual career stories, the specific moments that demonstrate their Skills, Experience, and Character in interviews, at networking events, and in every professional context that matters.
Your Career Story
The thread that ties your experience together. Your answer to "tell me about yourself."
Your career stories
Specific moments that show who you are in action, for any interview or networking context.
The SEC Framework
Skills, Experience, and Character — the three dimensions every great career story communicates.
A skill for life
What you learn here applies to every job, transition, and opportunity ahead of you.
At Revision Learning, we believe...