For high school students + parents
Write college essays on your own terms
Already have a college essay draft? Need someone to look it over? Then this is the perfect option for you! The Essay Feedback Package includes 3 rounds of personalized feedback* from one of our writing coaches. Once you submit your draft, your coach will return the feedback to you within 48 hours!
Want to discuss personal statement or supplemental essay strategy? Prefer to review your essay drafts live over Zoom with a Revision Learning Coach? Then this is the option for you! The Essay Strategy Package includes 2 hours* of live coaching with one of our writing coaches.
Want to have the option of submitting your essay for personalized feedback, but you’d also like to talk things through live with a writing coach? Go with this option! The Comprehensive Essay Support Package includes 3 rounds of feedback AND 2 hours of live online coaching*.
Revision Learning Software Accounts
With a free Revision Learning software account, students have access to:
Our StoryBuilder writing platform, which guides students through writing a story-based essay draft
DailyStory, which provides a different prompt each day for students to build their storytelling muscles
2 self-paced courses, Storytelling 101 + College Essay 101, which teaches students the basics of storytelling
With a upgraded Revision Learning software account, students will also have access to:
14 additional self-paced courses focused on storytelling for college and career success
All packages unlock access to the upgraded Revision Learning software
*We recommend 2-3 rounds of feedback per essay. A round of feedback can be used for a personal statement or the equivalent length (650 words or less) worth of supplemental essays. We also recommend splitting up your 2 hours of live coaching into multiple sessions so there’s time to revise your essay.
Prefer to work at your own pace? You can buy an upgraded account and get access to all 16 self-paced college and career courses!
Impact
“Needless to say, we are extremely grateful to you for the exceptional work that you did with our son… In the end, I strongly believe that you have taught him to be a better writer and to be self-reflective - important benefits of your process.”
— Parent of student admitted to MIT, Yale, Harvard, Princeton, UPenn, Columbia, Cornell and USC in 2023
