College Essay Feedback
Expert Revision Learning coaches provide personalized, detailed and actionable feedback on drafts asynchronously to help students take their college essays to the next level!
Revision Learning coaches provide asynchronous feedback on students’ college essay drafts. Students submit their drafts via the Revision Learning platform and within 48 hours, a coach returns the personalized feedback directly to the student.
The feedback consists of three parts:
A rubric that assesses submission readiness
Students receive an easy-to-follow, custom visual rubric that helps them instantly understand what’s working well in their essay and what needs the most attention.
The Revision Learning Success Rubric assesses an essay’s submission readiness based on our five key attributes of college admission essays:
Story
Moments
Structure
Details, Dialogue + Description
Grammar
A letter to the student highlighting 2-3 top-level revision strategies to yield biggest improvements
In-line comments on the student’s draft that offer question-based feedback and highlight specific places where the student can improve
At Revision Learning, we don’t edit students’ writing!
Instead, we provide actionable suggestions so students can make improvements on their own!
Pricing
Revision Learning provides affordable feedback starting at $50 per round (i.e. 1 personal statement draft submission). For individual student pricing, you can check out our packages here.
Questions about our feedback?
Impact
“I was really worried about my essay, especially because of the topic I was writing [about]. I wasn’t sure how it was going to turn out at all. But with the feedback I got, I became more confident in what I was writing and now I feel much more comfortable in submitting my essay. Thank you!”
“I just wanted to let you (whomever is reading this) know that my coach is the BEST!!! His feedback really helped improve my essays and I feel confident that they will show readers who I am. I’m am really happy that I am able to have him as my editor. :)”
“It is helpful to have the same reader review and critique the essay as it is being revised.”
“I’m extremely grateful for having the opportunity to have my work reviewed by Revision Learning. It’s unfortunate that not everyone is aware of the greatness Revision has to offer. I can see this being an essential when writing anything even beyond the classroom. Will definitely be sharing this site with my fellow seniors applying to college. Thank You! ”
“The advice and feedback I received was very specific and easy to understand, which was overall very helpful.”
“My coach had great comments and even offered to personally reach out to him if I was confused about a specific suggestion. His feedback was very personalized and proved that he read my essay in-depth. ”